Self Assessment of Q1b

Peer Assessment Question 1b Portfolio
Question/Theory:
Representation Essay

 Student name: Megan Boyle

MEG:                      Working at Grade:
List theorists & theories referenced:

1 Mulvey - Male Gaze

2 Clover - Final Girl

3 Dobbs - Scream Queens

4 Derry - Hauntings & Demonic Possesions

5 Gramsci - Hegemonic model & Idealogies

 List terminology words:

Representation, idea, voyeurs, post feminism approach, disequilibrium, symbolic, connotes.
Level 
 Description
 Ref no
 Grade
 Agree?
Level 1: 
 Outlines or describes 1 theorist with little reference to own production, and is under 250 words (1 side handwritten A4)

U
YES
Level 2 lower: 
 Introduces and describes 2-3 relevant theories using some correct terminology/theorists

E
YES
Level 2 mid: 
 Provides some examples but inconsistently and/or lacks correct explanation of how it applies

E/D-
YES
Level 2 higher: 
 Provides a maximum of 2 theories and introduces correctly in some depth and with some reference to own production

D
YES
Level 3 lower: 
 The essay uses paragraphs and full sentences, there are minimal errors in grammar or spelling

C-
YES
Level 3 lower: 
 Gives specific textual examples from own production of how 3-4 theories can be applied

C
YES
Level 3 mid: 
 Explains why or how it is relevant or significant to own production rather than explaining the theory

C/B-

Level 3 higher: 
 Discusses how the theory is or is not applicable and gives reasons to justify, possibly referring to existing media or creative intentions

B

Level 3 higher: 
 Consistently analyses how the theoretical approach creates significance or meaning 

B+

Level 4: 
 Evaluates the extent that 4 or more theories are applicable, with justification in relation to creative intentions 

A
Level 4: 
 Confidently justifies argument with detailed textual examples from the production and conventions of existing media it is based on

A
Level 4: 
 There are no or minimal grammatical or spelling errors and terminology is used confidently, regularly and correctly

A
What are the 3 priority targets to secure the grade or move to a higher level

1. Application of theory and analysis

 Rather than explaining the theory I need to apply it to my trailer and discuss its relevance through detailed examples.
2. Use of examples


 Give more in depth examples from my trailer in order to show my understanding of the theory and how it relates to my trailer.  Give examples of what I have done and how through techniques and specific examples of mise-en-scene. 
3. Use of terminology


 More consistent use of terminology throughout the essay and more use of different terminology included.

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